i wrote a song and i would like to know...
...your opinions it is supposed to be a tragic about lost
love(for ex: dad, friend..etc) plz be honest and tell me if it is
good or bad
i do not break that easily thanks:)
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/>Open Misery-by princess fakunle:) The sky is getting darker
The rain is pouring tears upon my Demolished face l should’ve never let my feelings Go to waste in outer space Pre-ch: So now l see Fire surrounding me It’s never ending And I’m bleeding All over me In this open misery Ch: Cause if you saw the love l had for you That l actually cared deeply for you V2 Your name carved in stone Fading every time l come alone My eyes are coloring in red l don’t even care if my makeup is ruined I’ll give you more than roses As long as you’re happy up there in rapture and Pre-ch: Ch: Bridge: Unleash and release my tears Until they fall heavily I’ll smash and torture I’m shaking I’m breaking My mind is hypnotized My body’s paralyzed My lungs are dying l can’t seem to breathe You once existed You once stood here and All is regretted never forgotten Pre-ch: Ch: The sky is getting darker And you are floating away Farther and farther
WOW!!!! That is like really good. You should put that on
youtube singing acapella. Keep it up. That could get you big money one
day.
I love it
I wish that you could record it and give me a copy =(
because those lyrics are exactly what i am looking for, because they
describe me at this moment.
Keep writing
and after you get all the you want on here, delete this question because someone might try to steal your song!
I love it! It is so powerful!
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